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Pay attention and listen
To the people near you.
Because often, people
Leave subliminal clues.
Even if they never
Meant to tell anyone,
Their actions could
Show you things going on.
People aren't perfect,
And people have pain.
So, try to be sunshine,
And never the rain.
This is my 29th poem for NaPoWriMo2012!

This is kind of an overflow of thoughts from yesterday, only this is more generally applicable.
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012   General Artist
was this about the guy who ran away? Hope he contacts you
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Vegetabelle Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Student General Artist
yes. It's also all the kids who started cutting and no one cared enough to notice, it's the one whose father raped her for years before she was brave enough to tell the police, it's all the ones who wanted someone to talk to them so they could open up about something they struggled with, but didn't know how to start the conversation that never happened.

I hope he does too.
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012   General Artist
you know i have only started to realise since joining dA how much i have been sheltered from alot of the evils of the world. I live in quite a nice area and have a loving family which i am grateful for. It seems though that more often than not people have been through some sort of trauma or abuse. It feels unbearable sometimes to hear how people treat each other, especially when it involves children.
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Vegetabelle Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Yeah. Its the kind of thing that really makes one appreciate what they have. :hug:
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SaphiqueX13 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sunshine... That's hard for some one for ever stuck in a state with skies full of miles of white clouds like fog... Why Oregon weather? Why?!

(Yet I try anyways)
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Vegetabelle Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Student General Artist
^_^ ha ha! the metaphorical sunshine. ;P

That's good though. And your comment made my day!
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SaphiqueX13 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your very welcome :D
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RedSuzanne Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh.. This is lovely!! I love a up ending! LOL
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Vegetabelle Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you. I prefer them as well, personally.
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RedSuzanne Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
i won't tell a soul. you are supposed to be filled with angst and dark thoughts. they could ban you from the club for this, you know. lol
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