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We were too impatient to wait
So it was never the right strength—
Too weak to be what you need,
And yet, too strong for me to handle.
It was too light for substance
But dark enough
To leave a bitter taste.
So it was never the right strength—
Too weak to be what you need,
And yet, too strong for me to handle.
It was too light for substance
But dark enough
To leave a bitter taste.
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the damned (they sermonize sacrilege)
these (self-)cannibals,
they've all got one-track minds
[sever them or]
they'll dissect you,
deceive you;
they've got
no caveats &
all vices
(don't you dare let them go &
fall in love - they're all
damnation-dwellers)
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oxymoronic.
i am so
full of empty
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I Am Not Dead !!!
You!
Who are you!
Who are you to call me dead.
I am the author.
I am the poet.
These words you read are mine
and mine alone.
On this work
is all rights reserved.
Who.
Who are you
Who are you to say the author is dead.
With each word i breathe.
The rhythm is my pulse.
The poem is my soul's cry from within me
Contained in this written form.
My poetry is evidence of my life.
I am not dead but alive forevermore.
Who are you to call me dead?
Who are you to disregard my intentions
my opinions, my life
in favor of your own ideas.
To disregard me is to disregard my poetry.
Each poem is a piece of me,
whether i distance myself or not.
I
I am sti
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This is my 27th poem for NaPoWriMo 2014. It was featured by Daily Lit Recognition in August 1st 2014, and in a Daily Lit Recognition Super- Feature on August 17th 2014. 
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Featured by: ivorysinkshore
you can by ghostinafog
Use of imagery is somewhat minimal but
still presents a vivid picture and theme. The
rhythm though, is the stand-out element- partially
due to the usage of typesetting.
Suggested by: BlackBowfin
Featured by: TwilightPoetess
We Were a Bad Cup of Coffee by Vegetabelle
From the suggester: The first time I read it- I
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I'm just now coming around to this: but that's the good thing about galleries here, since once something is posted, it's there. I'm glad I came across this. I'm not much into reading or writing poetry, but I love the experience of reading something that pulls me in and doesn't let go until it's done. Good writing, poetry or fiction, always does this. The emotion in this is intense, but in a slow-burn sort of way, and it's beautifully, hypnotically written. I'm marking this as a favorite.